@thedarklord_777

can we talk? do you no a way for you and me to talk i got discord.

@Vulkan_primark no

@ SebastinDazCastillo  no se la verdad, estoy sobreviviendo a la universidad pero buscaré un rato para escribir 

@ Vulkan_primark  en primera, no trates de reemplazar a los personajes de otras franquicias con los personajes de RWBY. Créeme, eso espanta a los lectores. Y en segunda, tu estilo no está nada mal

@Vulkan_primark no creo, eso ni lo habia considerado

@Vulkan_primark XD

@thedarklord_777 I wasn’t mad at all actually. If I was, I’d probably have capitalized that entire thing. I even gave you suggestions for the next few chapters to show I wasn’t mad at you for it. We all make mistakes.

@kieranashley119 relax men, in first place only Ruby and Jaune have the new upgrades for now. And in second place, you should know the dynamic in skibidi toilet; when you think that the alliance has the advantage, the toilets apear with something more powerful

And honestly, my view is “You used a great plot at the wrong time.” What I mean by this is you saw Chapter 6 left a cliffhanger of what happened to Nora, Phyrria, Weiss, and Yang. I think you rushed and jumped ahead of that by using the plot you used for chapter 7, which I think should’ve been used for Chapter 8. However though, I do know a way around that. I suggest you have the events of Episodes 58  and 59 for chapter 8 (with Ruby and Jaune of course), along with what happened to Nora, Phyrria, Weiss, and Yang from the lab to the meetup for Chapter 9, and then the events of Chapter 10 for Episode 60.(Please note that this is not meant to be offensive in any way. I still like the chapter regardless, even though this was worth mentioning. I am giving constructive criticism and some advice for upcoming chapters, and I’m Sorry if this offends you).

@ MiguelHZ05  Konrad sería de Venezuela

@FrancoYapura gracias