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I’m currently reading an enemies to lovers type book. I thought it was going somewhere, but then they had it put a fucking third party romance involving the girl loving another guy, dating and fucking him, which destroys the strong love hate relationship with the original guy she’s involved with. The newest chapter just released and now the third part dude is proposing to girl. At this point I don’t see why the girl would go back to the original guy she’s supposed to have a love hate relationship with, and if she does, that will just be bad writing from the author. If the authors intention and message is “true love may not exist for everyone” guess what, you didn’t need to involved this third party relationship. There are better ways to write about it. TIP, if you want to make a good enemies to lovers relationship story. NO THIRD PARTY ROMANCES!!!!! Sorry I usually don’t vent out on stories that the authors probably worked hard on, but I don’t like where this story is going.