Hello Ruth, I just finished “His Ex Girl”, after discovering it yesterday. At the risk of sounding trite, thank you not using your (possessive), when it should be you’re for you are. I read where you plan to publish your stories; and, I can only imagine, that a good editor will appreciate that you know the difference.
I like how you are developing the plot and moving the story along. I signed up to follow this story, so I can receive update notifications. Thank you for a wonderful story.