poolcave13

@SshayS your fanfic is very good even though its kind confusing when you jump from her b-day to her friends place and its a bit fast pace so you are all most trying to make the characters develop a bit to fast and if you want to be successful here on wattpad you will need to update faster. Your first chapter for the book about the little girl is very intriguing. I hope will take my advice, ps. I really like your books.                                          ~♈ Poolcave13

Califia

Hey Haley~~ Sorry sweetie  I mistakenly called you Marie below (it's my sisiter's name . Thanks for the follow--you won't be disappointed. Feel free to PM me anytime with comments or questions about Life, Love, (Sex), or just the stupendous craft of fiction.
          
          Looking forward to us staying connected, Haley.
          
          ~~Califia

poolcave13

It's ok  most call me Marie because there's always a ton of haley's in my classes 
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Califia

Hello Marie~~Thanx for the votes on "Tattoed Princess" I'm pleased you are getting hooked on this saga. Stay tuned the adventures for Zaria continue in to "Book Two."
          
          Looking over your reding interests I think  you would enjoy my erotic tale, "A Walk in the Countryside" 
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/16999941-a-walk-in-the-countryside
          
          It's just a short teen romance, but heats up pretty quickly in "Part 4"--which , you might not be  able to access.  You see that section was give a "R-Private" rating--yeah like the WP people don't think we girls think like that or do that thing sometimes. . .. guess again guys!  :)
          
          Enjoy!
          (If you have difficulty getting "Part 4" to appear--just ask and i will send you the link.
          
          Let's stay connected
          
          ~~Califia

poolcave13

Ok thanks I'll be sure to check it out 
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poolcave13

@SshayS your fanfic is very good even though its kind confusing when you jump from her b-day to her friends place and its a bit fast pace so you are all most trying to make the characters develop a bit to fast and if you want to be successful here on wattpad you will need to update faster. Your first chapter for the book about the little girl is very intriguing. I hope will take my advice, ps. I really like your books.                                          ~♈ Poolcave13

poolcave13

No problem and you too
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SlowWifi7

@poolcave13 thanks for the advice I'll try my best :) have a wonderful day
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