Kissamielinen
Dear Writer!
I just got to the end of "My Evil Alpha Husband". I confess to you that I don't remember that a story has ever made me feel so strongly. The choice of topic is bold, the implementation is brutal but excellent work.
After a while, I tried to rename Phayu and Rain while reading, because I was afraid that I would permanently hate Phayu, whom I adore in LITA. As I saw and read, the story forced every reader on a strong emotional roller coaster. I literally could have killed Phayu.
The story is terrible. It's not your work that's terrible, it's the story you've told.
The son of a monster father has become a monster himself, committing terrible crimes against the one he is supposed to love and protect. There's no violence he hasn't committed against Rain, except for murder, but practically, he almost killed the boy's soul. Physical and mental abuse, cruel treatment, humiliation, rape... If it wasn't for P'Pai, Sky and their family, it would have been the same. The special tragedy of the whole thing is that Rain knew from the beginning that Phayu was his Alpha.
When Phayu started to realize what Rain really does and means to her... In reality, this marriage and relationship could not be saved. Phayu cannot be excused by his past, what he did cannot be forgiven. I feel sorry for the child who was Phayu, my heart bleeds for him. But grown-up Phayu is indeed what Rain said. Not a strong Alpha, just a cruel Alpha.
In addition, I am glad that the end of the story was basically positive.
Congratulations again. It is also a wonderful creation in its horror.
Kissamielinen
@pandu1903 The story made me think so much that my psychiatrist and I talked about it (I'm not crazy), and I recommended the doctor to read it. The doctor was very interested in the story and the relationship between Phayu and Rain, the impact of Phayu's childhood on the development of Phayu's personality, and when I told her about the story, she tried to diagnose Phayu and Rain's condition based on this. I have to say that, according to the doctor, Phayu needed long therapy and great willpower to overcome the toxic influence of his father, to actually be able to change, to dare to trust his partner and himself. Although according to the doctor, such a success is rare in similar cases, but it can happen. Thank you for writing and sharing this story with us. Really terrible story, but great writing. Thank You again and again.
Kissamielinen
@pandu1903 Dear pandu1903! Your story is very powerful. You can be very, very proud of yourself, because you wrote the story very bravely, yet sensitively. I've read it twice so far and it's become one of my favorites. The whole article is very thought-provoking. And I think I will read it again and again, of course not immediately. Of course, I didn't hate Phayu, and I'm glad that the story ended on a positive note. I honestly admit that I hated Phayu for a part of the story, but as the story progressed and I started to understand the things that happened in the past, I already felt sorry for him, and then I felt proud for both of them. I was extremely happy that Phayu was able to see what kind of person his father was, what he did to him, and what kind of person he became because of his father. And he was ready to do anything to change. I'm glad that both of them found the strength within themselves, both of them changed, and their souls, their relationship, and their entire personalities came into balance. And indeed they became fate mates. Rain also became a very strong personality, in fact he became a dominant Omega, and despite the things he suffered, he was willing to mentally support Phayu's therapy. The alternate ending would have been horrible. Tó be continued...
pandu1903
@Kissamielinen Well... Thank you so much. This means a lot to me. I am glad I could make you feel the emotions. I am sorry that it made you feel so strongly against Phayu... And also, a teeny teeny bit proud? I am really grateful for the love you have shown. Thank you so much!
