Savannah or Phoenix

Hey old yeller14 is me too so come check both accounts out

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Hey I want to thank everybody who has helped me get over 1.14K views on book 1 but I am starting book 2 so come and check both out 

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          Hey what's up I was wondering if you sent me your reviews on my previous request

And what do you mean by confused,the paragraphs seem fine to others

Okay never mind on last message I just figured it out

hey, i've read up to part 1 of your book and i will finish it later, but here are my thoughts:
          -the description may be a bit too vague, you can be more specific as to what might occur in the story, but don't give too much away
          -the paragraphs are a little long, so if you're gonna edit it you can chop them up into shorter paragraphs so readers won't be confused

Hi everyone can u please read the Phoenix rises by me

It's no problem and I surely will tell you my views. Thanx for following me :) I appreciate it

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