Sasukes_Rodeo

I was reading your story "Naruto the unmasked story", and I wanted to help a fellow writer out with your punctuation. 
          
          " Instead of doing this and putting a space between the first and last words and the quotation mark, "
          
          "Write it like this without a space. This is how it's supposed to be."
          
          I didn't want to call you out, only to correct you so you don't make the same mistake again. Hope you don't see it as an insult!

Sasukes_Rodeo

For example, in the first chapter when it says 
            
            " Get back here you demon " 
            
            It really should be 
            
            "Get back here you demon."
            
            Or
            
            "Get back here you demon!"
            
            Just wanted to add an example to make more sense.
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marconothere

I have updated

naruto_fan23

@jai_blu then it's a deal
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marconothere

@jai_blu of course i will
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naruto_fan23

@jai_blu omg yes, i love to request a one shot but its gonna be hard to decide so please give me time. of course i'll check out your other books and please support me on my books as well
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NightWhistle

hiii I just read Naruto The Unmasked Story and loved it! I will be reading your next work next thanks for the awesome stories!

naruto_fan23

@NightWhistle thank you for reading my story and for you support. sorry for the really late reply . please continued to support me and if you have any feedback or questioned you want me to answer, please tell me and if it's about my grammar ' i know already ' lmfao
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