lyttlejoe
Hello, and thank you for choosing The Bride for your collection, I hope you find it worth your while.
jhatka
Hi , your chapters are short because you wrote pure story and dialogue. Jake's uncle came and gone , we only knew that he talked to jake with sweet(may be sickly) voice. How he looks , his or other characters body structures, what's they wearing, how the castle was built, is there any garden, stable , and many more details to lengthening the story would give us visual imagination of story. Sorry if you don't like because I am only a reader not an author.
Exiled_Introvert
Thank you for adding A Royal Mix Up to your reading list! I hope you enjoy reading my book! :D
nadja4y
@ sleepinthewoods ^-^