michaeljames024

If you happen to make your way to my page, please feel free to leave comments or criticisms. Tell me what sucks about my story. What do I need to fix? What was boring? Would you keep reading the book if you found it on a clearance rack at target? Don’t hold back, I need the advice. 

michaeljames024

If you happen to make your way to my page, please feel free to leave comments or criticisms. Tell me what sucks about my story. What do I need to fix? What was boring? Would you keep reading the book if you found it on a clearance rack at target? Don’t hold back, I need the advice.