mallaboo12

@--purpIebIoom I read your book and I can see that it has great potential! There are a few spelling and grammar errors, but once those are fixed, it’ll be looking better! Although, as I was reading I realized that there are a few concepts you might not understand, for example, what a virgin is. A virgin is someone who has never participated in the act of intercourse, A.K.A sex. One more thing I’d like to add, some of the things you have in your book could be found extremely offensive. I just wanted to warn you before you had someone hate message you. Other than those things, this book can be great with just a tad bit of editing!❤️