Story ratings, based on how good I think they are. 

First story: Wrong Number(HxH)
It kind of sucks, you can't really tell what's going on. I rarely told you who was actually talking. Ooc characters. Kind of cringey in a few chapters. But people seem to think it's hilarious. Completely a crackfic. 5/10, just because it gets like 1000 more reads per day.

Second story: The Lion The Witch And The Audacity of This Bitch
Still, you can't tell what's going on at most times. I didn't really describe anything, or use actions unless absolutely necessary. Ooc charactes.Though it's funny, completely a crackfic. 8/10, I still read through the chapters sometimes, makes me laugh.

Third story: Rewind(HxH)
My first attempt at actual seriousness and plot. Still working on making character not ooc. Better, more professional writing. Still funny, and a bit chaotic. But not a complete crackfic. 7.5/10, Not sure I like writing more serious things quite as much, less readers.
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  • JoinedMarch 4, 2022



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