KadeLMAOO

Hey I like your book, but could you maybe add more detail on why she threw her down the basement stairs after she knocked her out like if it was to protect her why’d she do the most violent ass way to knock her out  I just didn’t understand what that was about, other than that I think your book (s) are okay I recommend doing something a little more with the plot especially with the reporter because I think they beginning was done really well but then it got kinda dull. I think you’re a great writer just constructive criticism.

gayforjustgay

@KadeLMAOO you will see later in the sequel 
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