MatthewRiley
Hey I've read your other new parts to letters to ray and you've definitely got my attention. looking forward to your next post. You might want to consider slowing down when you're typing or proof reading a little bit because there are a few spelling errors but it doesn't take away from the story.
Also i wanted to ask a favor. I posted the first part of my first story today. If you have time could you give it a once over and give me some feedback. Criticism is always welcome. Just want to get it out there so i can get all the opinions i can. Thanks Jackie