@jasonstory102
Oh, man...
Did you answer my last message in our private conversation? I forgot Wattpad would be deleting those.
@HydeTheHidden yeah, wattpad deleting private massage... Unfortunately, I'm also forgor the last message.
Monster Girl Quest Paradox has release Part 3 Demo... Untranslated.
*And boy, i am no depressed*
Alright, while you guys waiting for the next update... I'll tell my plan for next book after i finish...
First, i wanted to make a sequel fanfic called "MGQ: The healer - Six ancestor Awakening"... Inspired by SirKaerdron from Fanfiction.net
Next, i might to add a backstory for 2 mysterious character...
And finally, the paradox...
That's my plan, i hope i won't change it anytime soon.
Update soon enough... before that, i have to unpublish some part... for a fix.
Huh... apparently the Updated chapter isn't updated in mobile app.. but it's updated in web version... interesting.
alright.. don't be surprised... if you see I'm uploading another story... This time it's a re-upload from fanfiction by user name "Sir Kaerdron"... however.... this is because i'm bored... and i got the permission to upload it here as long I'm credit him... start uploading his story at 1 september, every 7 PM +GMT
still working on "The healer" story if you were wondering...
Guys, how do you make a fight scene correctly?
@jasonstory102 Old message, but whatever... This is how I do: If it's an incosequential one; just skip it. not like, entirely, though. just right down the most important details. Such as the main styles, and strategies each character uses.... I mean, you can also skip it entirely, but it wouldn't be a fight scene, would it? Then, the important ones. it's important that there are times where each individual move is portraid, although not in too much detail or else the reader will get bored, but enough that they know what's happening. Such as detailing the stype of attack, the place of impact, the intensity and the speed for more epicness. Be varied with descriptions. Also, be mindful that not everyone knows everything about combat. for instance: you may know what a roundhouse kick is, but some people may not, so do a brief description of the move. You don't need to do it everytime a move is used, only the first. Dialogues between action is cool too, to add some exposition and interactiveness between characters. such as: -"Damn, you just kicked me in the groin! such technique!" -"Thanks, i learnt it form my dad! He always kicked me in the balls the hardest! -"What?" -"Nothing, let's keep fighting!" Really, really dumb example, but it works. Inspiration is very important also. if you don't have a good ideas for coreographies, you can look up fighting scenes and based yourself off them. Don't make it blatant, though; I said inspiration, not copy. Lastly, appropriate music while you write can make the whole proccees way smoother, and you can also generate more ideas that way. That is my whole writing fight scenes process. Sometimes...
Yo, how are you guys?
New Remake of Seton Gakuen fanfiction.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/309487247
Just publish another story. Sorry if my english is bad.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/258167038
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