@jackattack364 Can I be honest? any story involving Jesus isn't enjoyable for me. Like the passion of the christ, it was both not entertaining and antisemitic. your story is not antisemitic, but the use of jesus is played out way to much, south park, the simpsons, family guy, american dad, Mel Gibson, the whole religion, have made him just stale. The devil part is good because he comes in many forms in fictions, trigon in dc, but also lucifer the show on netflix, and mephisto in marvel, and several others. But Jesus he has a very one dimensional personality in story telling. So I'd avoid using Jesus as a character in anything, Im not trying to discourage anyones religion or be rude, I'm just trying to give feedback, so sorry if I hurt your feelings.