In most stories of bad boys and mean men. The writer just states that that person is dangerous they never show any proof of how he's dangerous. 'He's a bad boy he's gone to jail, he's hit innocents' okay cool that was the past the writer SAID he had. But does a bad boy just instantly stop their bad boy ways when you start reading their book? The writer has got to  characterise the bad boy as a BAD boy. What did he do bad if I never READ in your story the bad things the boy who's bad had done? ** Dont mind my lists, theyre not my work, just position **