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Chillin' with a hair tie,
          No makeup, with some sweatpants on
          You know I can always be that guy
          You can think about me all night long
          
          But I think you need something to think of me
          Something that will keep you warm
          And show you we can be more than just this
          So, baby, if you are not ready for my kiss
          
          Then you can wear my sweatshirt
          And you can tell your friends
          We'll be together 'til the end
          Girl, you can wear my sweatshirt
          'Cause you're the only one I hold
          And I don't want you to be cold
          So, baby, wear my...
          
          When you go to sleep at night,
          When you wake up in the morning
          And when you walk the halls
          See, girl, you know you wanna flaunt it
          
          Said this may be the start of something new
          Girl, I'm gonna tell you exactly what I wanna do...
          ...is more than just this
          So, baby, if you are not ready for my kiss
          
          Then you can wear my sweatshirt
          And you can tell your friends
          We'll be together 'til the end
          Girl, you can wear my sweatshirt
          'Cause you're the only one I hold
          And I don't want you to be cold
          So, baby, wear my
          
          And you can wear my sweatshirt
          And I don't want you to be cold
          So you can wear my...
          
          So you can wear my sweatshirt
          And you can tell your friends
          We'll be together 'til the end
          Girl, you can wear my sweatshirt
          'Cause you're the only one I hold
          And I don't want you to be cold
          So, baby, wear my
          
          ...sweatshirt
          'Cause you're the only one I hold
          And I don't want you to be cold
          So, baby, wear my...

ClaireWow

@frostiller Hey :) would you mind reading at least 2 chapters (more if you like) of DHWS and give a honest opinion about it?

frostiller

@ClaireWow I wish you the bestest luck you have a big imagination everything a writer needs I'm glad I can help. Until next time.
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ClaireWow

@frostiller Thank you for being honest :). It's my first posted book so I'm trying to get better as a writer. The fact that it goes everywhere, it's my mind.. I dislike unrealistic stories yet like "Wtf" stories at the same time and decided to do a mix. Have a nice day ❤
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frostiller

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@ClaireWow So I read plenty of the chapters from your book and I guess I have to give you my honest opinion its not a book I would read at least not anymore but I love LOVE the plot, the story had its moment when I did feel uncomfortable or plain out confuse yet it kept me guessing and wanting to know more. For example: you have these three boys (this is just my opinion on how far I read) one Rob has a huge crush on her but since she not interested he gets violent, then you have "Blondie" who wants to work things out with her and get with her but I believe she in this for only sexs or just playing with him like she does with every other guy she fuck, and finally her brother who she lost her virginity too was a big surprise it made me say "wtf" out loud now that I know about the brother and her relationship I know for sure a guy gotta have some tough love to stay with her. This book is really interesting and hook the reader in really good but you have everything going everywhere your book needs more walking into but then again that's just my opinion.
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