floverryicecake

@LennieBreeze
          	
          	haha, thank you <3
          	
          	And no, your story is a pretty good start, we all get stuck with the titles <3 so no worriiiiieeedyou'll be a hit!! :)

danielleb333

hey! i was wondering if you would check out my story called innocent eyes? I've had over 9000 reads so far, so it must be good. But i guess that all depends on the reader now doesn't it? Well non the less, plz check it out. I would greatly appreciate your feedback. also vote and fan if you like. 
          *´¨) 
          ¸.•´¸.•*´¨) ¸.•*¨) 
          (¸.•´ (¸.•` ¤ Danielle = ) 
          
          ~~if i get a chance i will surely return the favor~~
          

CreatingBalance_

hello. (: 
          i know this is going to be a very irritating message, but i really need your help. see, i know people don't particularly like twilight anymore becuse it is totally over-rated - and i totally agree - but i just posted this fanfiction and i was wondering if you think i should continue? 
          
          if you don't like twilight, then feel free to ignore this, but i would really appreciate it. basically, i wrote it ages ago and i recently found it, so i decided to post it. 
          
          i promise is it's not a typical story; the storyline isn't half bad, so i would seriously appreciate any feedback. 
          
          although, please, if you could; some proper critisicm and improvements are much needed. im o wattpad to become better, not to go offline with some 'interesting' comments. so, please... fire the critisicm at me; il take it and deal with it. (: 
          
          thankyou, ever so much, 
          creatingbalance_ 
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/487765-echoing-sunlight

2sweet

Hello:) 
          Can you please read ‘the sweetest lie- losing my virginity’ 
          It is a TRUE heartbreaking story about my life. 
          I promise you it wont bore you or take up much of your time. 
          Please let me know what you think of it. 
          & I would happily read/vote/comment/fan yours:) 
          
          thank you ever so much xxxx 
          
          p.s if you really hate my stories then i'll cut my fingers off and stop writing:P

serval

Hey, I know the­­­­­­­­se are super ann­oy­in­g,­ a­nd­ I­'m­ not gonna beg
          But I have this story called
          'An Albino On A­­­­­­­­ Reality Show.. ­Wh­at­ c­ould go wrong?'
          that I was hopi­­­­­­­­ng you could tak­e ­a ­lo­ok­ a­t ­an­d ­give­ my ­some feedback!
          Thanks, I know ­­­­­­­­these get annoying!
          (:

CreatingBalance_

I know these messages are annoying, but please don’t fret; I ask you only if you have spare time. Basically, I was wondering whether you could take a quick peek at my newest story – ‘Change of Fate’ – and perhaps tell me what you think of it? If you are too busy, probably writing your own stories or reading your friends’ stories, then don’t worry about it, but it’s worth a try, yes?
          
 #Change Of Fate#
          The world between Heaven and Hell – the realm of the living – live two normal teenagers, or so they thought. Eva and Maya no nothing of their unusual heritage, but when they are kidnapped by a legion of rogue Fallen Angels; they are told they hold the key to save their world. There is an immortal war between Heaven and Hell, Good versus Evil, but if it continues the way it is going, it will eventually destroy all three worlds. What will happen? Eva and Maya are only sixteen; can they really save the Realm of the Living and the two worlds after? 
          
          If you could take a quick look, I would be so grateful and happily return the favour.