flaxen-finch

Hello all! I just came on here to excitedly share that both of my ONC 2024 entries, The Mermaid's Reckoning and A Second Verse, have made it to the contest's Shortlist! This is my first year submitting to ONC and I'm beyond pleased to have made it this far—though it took a lot of work to get here! Much love to the fellow contestants, and best of luck as we go into the final placings! 
          	
          	P.S. Feel free to check out my entries and decide for yourself if they're winner-worthy ;)

Loiosh

@flaxen-finch Woo hooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!! Congrats! I'm glad you took the chance and entered.
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flaxen-finch

Hello all! I just came on here to excitedly share that both of my ONC 2024 entries, The Mermaid's Reckoning and A Second Verse, have made it to the contest's Shortlist! This is my first year submitting to ONC and I'm beyond pleased to have made it this far—though it took a lot of work to get here! Much love to the fellow contestants, and best of luck as we go into the final placings! 
          
          P.S. Feel free to check out my entries and decide for yourself if they're winner-worthy ;)

Loiosh

@flaxen-finch Woo hooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!! Congrats! I'm glad you took the chance and entered.
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flaxen-finch

Hello everyone! I'm pleased to share that I've successfully finished and submitted both of my ONC entries to the third and final round of the contest! The Mermaid's Reckoning has a final word count of just over 31,000 words, while A Second Verse has just over 29,000. I'm beyond proud (and relieved) to have finished them in time! (Also, I wrote 60,000 words within the span of a few months? That's actually insane). 
          
          I'll be stepping back to take a breather while I wait for the results to come out, and I don't have any future projects in the works as of now. In the meantime, thank you all for your continued support, best of luck to other contestants, and props to those who have stuck it out this far or attempted the contest in the first place! It's been tough, but I'm proud to have been a part of it.

flaxen-finch

ICYMI: The Mermaid's Reckoning is now complete! I'll wait a day or two to submit the final product to the contest; in the meantime, please do let me know if you see any mistakes or find anything confusing! I'll be doing some proofreading on my own but it's never a bad idea to have some extra sets of eyes looking it over.
          
          I'm going to continue to write A Second Verse in the hopes I'll be able to finish it before the final deadline. If not, I'll continue to share it with you all either way!
          
          Thank you all for your continued support!

flaxen-finch

A few updates regarding my ONC entries!
          
          I've nearly finished writing The Mermaid's Reckoning! The final few chapters will be released throughout the week. I can't believe our journey is nearly over, but I'm excited to share the rest of the story with you all.
          
          Moving forward now that The Mermaid's Reckoning is (almost) entirely written, I'll be focusing more of my attention on A Second Verse to try and finish it in time to meet the deadline. If you suddenly see that I'm releasing multiple chapters at once, or on a wacky schedule... That's why!
          
          In the meantime, please do let me know if you see any obvious grammatical errors, plot holes, or generally confusing things in either of those stories! While I try my best to proofread, readers' eyes might notice them more quickly than I do—and I might not notice if a plot point or scene is unclear, since I'm the one writing it! I'd like to catch and fix any mistakes before I've submitted my entries to the final round.
          
          Thank you all for your continued support! We're in the home stretch!

flaxen-finch

I’m beyond pleased to share that both of my ONC 2024 entries (The Mermaid’s Reckoning and A Second Verse) have qualified in Round 2! I plan on releasing the next chapters of both very soon. Thank you all for your continued support, and congratulations to all of the other contestants, whether you’ve qualified in this round or not! Write on!

flaxen-finch

A question to all you readers/writers/Greek mythology nerds out there! I know a bit about mythology but would love to hear your thoughts.
          
          Gorgons (Medusa, etc) were said to have "turned men to stone" (quoted directly from Mythology by Edith Hamilton in this case). "Men" was often used to refer to humans in general, however... Do you think women/non-men would technically apply to this rule? In Percy Jackson and some other retellings of Medusa, that's a yes—everyone who looks at Medusa, no matter their gender, is at risk. It would make sense that men = humans. But... What do you think?
          
          I've seen a bunch of fan art and such about Medusa and "her blind girlfriend," which is honestly adorable. However: if Medusa did have a girlfriend, would said girlfriend have to be blind in order to be with her? Would she be unable to look at Medusa, or would she not face this risk since she's not a man?
          
          Maybe Greek mythology doesn't specify this... But what would you think about a retelling that specifically referred to men, thereby leaving a loophole? Or would it still make sense for Medusa/Gorgons to be paired with a blind partner? Also, if anyone is able to find a link to the actual text of Medusa's curse (which would probably better specify this), I will love you forever.
          
          Sorry for the rambling—I'm honestly just curious what everyone thinks and would love to hear from those who know Greek mythology better than I do! And I'm definitely not asking this because I want to write a story about Medusa/another Gorgon ;)

flaxen-finch

@HypnosNeeded thank you so much for your input! That’s all really interesting to hear and I really appreciate it!
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HypnosNeeded

And after Perseus beheaded her in her sleep he gifted it to Minerva. Before her head is gifted however Perseus must travel back to gift Minerva and receive praise and glory for his actions. He travels to ‘Western Limit of the Earth’ and seeks food and shelter under King Atlas. However when he claims his victory and parentage King Atlas disregards them and demands he leaves. This upsets Perseus and rather than leave he chooses to show King Atlas Medusa’s severed head, averting his own gaze, and turns the king to stone. However it is also said that when he was changed more occurred as stated: 
            
            ‘Atlas, with all his bulk, was changed into stone. His beard and hair became forests, his arms and shoulders cliffs, his head a summit, and his bones rocks. Each part increased in bulk till he became a mountain, and (such was the pleasure of the gods) heaven with all its stars rests upon his shoulders.’
            
            Many would argue that he should have only turned to stone but seeing as Medusa’s curse was used on a giant the effects were completely different. In Greek mythology the Gods and Goddesses are very strong and outgoing, however they are never the smartest in most cases. Minerva cursed Medusa for her beauty and in most accounts disgracing her temple with Neptune willingly or not. Rage, jealousy, and spitefulness is usually their motives when cursing and taking from mortals so in this moment the idea was no one would ever look upon her as a beautiful woman but a horrid creature. I like the ideas I see surfacing around, that the idea of a mortal unable to see her does not fall under the same umbrella that most mortals and animals did. 
            
            Write what you believe, because that’s all mythology is, bits and pieces of the past that we chose to interpret how we desire. So write your heart out! 
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HypnosNeeded

I personally believe that when it comes to mythology a strong part of the truth is what you believe and want in your story. It’s already so complicated across the board because no everyone agrees on certain things when it comes to Greek mythology, especially when you start to bring Roman mythology into the mix. I stand by Bulfinch’s Mythology as he references not only to his own writing but others as well, even those contradicting his own work. In his writing he speaks briefly of Medusa and her abilities. He says 
            
            ‘She became a cruel monster of so frightful an aspect that no living thing could behold her without being turned into stone. All around the cavern where she dwelt might be seen the stony figures of men and animals which had chanced to catch a glimpse of her and had been petrified with the sight.’
            
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flaxen-finch

Hello all! Believe it or not, I managed to decide on a prompt to use for ONC 2024, so my story is up and I'm ready to write! Here's to hoping that this is my year! Best of luck to all the other ONC writers! :)
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/361890536-the-mermaid%27s-reckoning-onc-2024

Loiosh

@flaxen-finch Woo hoooooo!!! I can't wait to read it :-)
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flaxen-finch

Ah yes, the annual struggle: can I decide on an ONC prompt in time to actually write something? :')

flaxen-finch

@GraveyardSiren choosing a prompt honestly seems to be the hardest part...
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flaxen-finch

@Loiosh that's true! None of the prompts completely fit what I was imagining at first, but I'm sure I can find something to go with that story ;-)
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GraveyardSiren

@flaxen-finch I had the same struggle with finding one to use.
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