To be honest, I love 365 Days With You. Just.. the only thing is that I solemly believe Niall bottoms verses all of the One Direction lads, so it was a bit uncomfortable at some points. But other than that, you're writing is amazing and don't ever stop!
My writing may be pathetic, but that's why you're the writer and I'm the reader. Am I right?
Lot's Of Love Mate,
~ TMPA