Hello Erica, I just finished reading Xavier's precious from my account, I'm using my sister's account to drop this message because I can't hold it in again and my phone is bad.
You already wrote a great story and we appreciate that. But please don't spoil the story by making Xavier and Erica get a divorce.
You can write something else on how they work thier relationship. To me in a story like this Xavier should have gone for therapy because falling in love with Erica is ok but it can actually destroy them. They rushed everything, I don't see divorce as a good thing for them. I see them see them seeking professional help to know how to work their relationship.
Erica feels hurt when he talks about sapphire, we don't even know who brought the idea of naming their child sapphire, I think it's Erica tho.
Instead of writing about their divorce try to rectify the mistakes in their relationship so they won't break, Xavier can't keep breaking please and Erica needs happiness.
Don't divorce them just rectify their lives please and we don't know their age .
Consider this please, thank you.