Sophia (@eclectus)'s conversations

eclectus

Oct 22, 2014 04:44AM

Before I start  I want to say that I love the story and don't mean this to be mean or harmful in any way. But as a writer I appreciate criticism, and wanted to tell you my thoughts on the story. First of all, I feel like the characters could use a little more depth, as some of their personalities are a bit classic. Add a bit of a twist to each of their back stories. Overall I really like it. Keep up the good work!!

Its_Beaumont

Feb 06, 2015

@eclectus, I hope you love Angel Blue as much as I've enjoyed writing it (and planning the sequel hehe). expect an update this weekend! I appreciate the follow so much <3

eclectus

Oct 22, 2014

Before I start  I want to say that I love the story and don't mean this to be mean or harmful in any way. But as a writer I appreciate criticism, and wanted to tell you my thoughts on the story. First of all, I feel like the characters could use a little more depth, as some of their personalities are a bit classic. Add a bit of a twist to each of their back stories. Overall I really like it. Keep up the good work!!