daphneslove

I am making book covers! I'm getting into a little bit of editing/photoshopping and by no means am I going to be a great cover-maker, but I enjoy it and some people need it. PMs are open for any problems ♡

daphneslove

How does Toru Hagakure see?
          
          Her quirk is invisibility right? Light would pass straight through her retina. We couldn't see if light didnt reflect on our retinas, but she can? 
          
          The only thing I can think of is that, she can change how light reflects off of her body, right? (I say this because of that one move she has). So, what if she's just constantly reflecting light off of her retinas so that she can see.
          
          That, or she's blind and has a great sense of her surroundings. 

daphneslove

HELP. A while back I read a really well written bakutodo ff. I dont remember the name, but it was something about a school for delinquents. They go there and the LOV are students as well. And every once and a while, all the teachers would leave and everyone would break out into a fight or something. 
          
          If you know the name, please, I beg you, tell me.

daphneslove

I just found an adorable trope thanks to a discord username.. 
          (C.[A,B.C]. = Character.[A,B,C].)
          
          Character A and B have been friends since forever, longer even. C.A. blatantly flirts with C.B. and C.B. remains clueless and C.C. is tired of their shenanigans. 
          
          C.A. holds up their fingers, eyes widening in pleasure. "You know, there are only 21 letters in the alphabet," they say smugly.
          
          C.B. looks up, shaken. "What? No, you're wrong. There are twenty-"
          
          "Oh, yeah. You're right. I forgot U, R, A, Q, T."
          
          C.B. pulls a blank face. "How did you forget them?" 
          
          C.A. falls to the ground in despair, "Aaaaa, you'll never get it C.B.!! C.C. tell them!"
          
          C.C. glances up from reading their book, wrinkling their nose at C.A., "No."

daphneslove

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If you're wanting to write a good fucking story, don't give me any of that "my parents died when I was a baby and now I have trauma that made me an emotionless blunt person and now I have to find peace without any emotions" bullshit. 
          
          Give me a character who shows emotions. Kill their parents during the middle of the story, hell, kill off the maj  characters friends, spouse, even their children for all I care! 'Cause it's fishy as hell that a teenager (or adult) is able to remember their parents death when they were three years old. 
          
          Give me terror that the main character might not make it. Focus on the side character enough so people know that they're there (but not too much so that the focus is taken off of the main character).
          
          PLEASE, for the love of God, if you're going to make a character who has trauma, or a character who is "emotionless", give them a reason to be that way. Build on that trauma so they have a reason to be so powerful (or weak). 
          
          Get an outside opinion, someone who has never laid eyes on what you're writing. Let them give you fresh ideas. And PLEASE don't forget to take constructive criticism!

coolguy5980

Thank you for the advice Goo, and I will take constructive criticism I’m willing to I won’t be like Yandere Dev!XD
            
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