bigbosskman92

May the Fourth be with you.

CLmauve

star fox: dark valley continues a winning streak of fanfics, encompassing a devious mystery villain and interstellar adventure galore. good plot, characters, world building, and tonal consistency maintain a bright future as star fox looks to the infinite possibilities of the final frontier. keep up the good work :)

CLmauve

the bane of lylat may have benefitted a little from subdivision into smaller chapters / paragraphing to improve readability. on the other hand, everything that makes cad bane intimidating and memorable remain evident throughout, continuing the author's tradition of honoring one of the galaxy's best bounty hunters through good writing, character development, consistency, and pacing. keep it up :)

bigbosskman92

Thanks for the review and the votes.
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