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Chapter 35: In The Living Years
Is finally up. And it’s a BIG ONE. Do not miss. And once again, sorry for being a broken record, but I anyway appreciate comments. It doesn’t have to be anything long. But feedback of some sorts helps me to know how I can improve. Thank you.
Chapter 34 is up! Thank you!
And look at that! Chapter 33 is now up! I think Chapter 32 was one of those chapters where the thoughts on my head had reaching the paper. I’m excited, since we’re approaching chapter 35. Let’s just say it’s going to be a big one.
Chapter 32 is finally up. Sorry for the long wait but it’s here and ready. Thank you!
Hello everyone. For those who have been following “Cake Boy” I’m still working on it. Don’t worry, I haven’t given up on it. I’ve been working on some other stuff. Chapter 32 will be up soon. Also, some of you might notice that the ending to chapter 31 has been altered. The ending is still the same but some dialogue has been cut. I didn’t particularly like how it was sounding and I felt two teenagers wouldn’t talk like that. So I changed it up but kept some of the dialogue I felt worked.
Chapter 31 is finally. And for you John fans, the wait is done. He is finally here! Read to see how he and Julian get along
UPDATE ON CHAPTER 30: I changed the last two lines between Bianca and Julian. I wasn’t happy with how their conversation ended. Specifically, I felt what a Bianca said was too harsh and too definitive. Although their friendship is on the rocks at this moment, this chapter is not supposed to signified the end of their friendship. However, whether their friendship continues remains to be seen…
Chapter 30 is up. Slowly but surely this story is getting more reads. I’m glad people are enjoying it, even if it’s a small amount. The one thing I ask is that you leave a comment if you enjoy a chapter. And if you have constructive criticisms, I appreciate it as well. You can’t be one a good writer, unless you learn from your mistakes. Thanks and God bless.
Chapter 29 is ready to read. Thank you and have a great day.
Hey there! Chapter 28 is up. Thank you!