Arianna

Hi! I think your books have wonderful plot lines and you're great at writing! However, I do think you should proof read before posting and fixing any spelling, punctuation, and grammar errors! It'll help keep readers around and get more votes so more people read your stories! :)

Hi!
          How ya ppl doing?

While You guys wait for me to update, read my other books on my other account Your_Main_Writer

i have no idea what u mean

I just noticed that after it all has "abd" instead of "and".  That might drive away readers.

Also I'm deleting The Black Car Society. I'm also not into it.  I don't know what to do next so I'm deleting.

Guys I'm deleting Eagle City , I'm not really into it. don't really like it.  Just telling you I'm deleting it.

k I updated.

@EmeraldRubyOfLife Oh, well.  Do Roar

With Death A waiting I need to update with you or brainstorm on kick. song lyrics people need to suggest songs for me too do.