Thank you so much for reading my first story of VESSEL, this story is the fulfilment of a dream I never thought possible.

Coming from Indonesia with no formal training or even an experience in creative writing, expressing my imagination in English was a massive challenge. To share this world with you, I used ai tools to help translate my thoughts and expand the story. While technology helped build the bridge, the heart, characters, and soul of this story came entirely from my own imagination.

This is my very first step as a writer, and I want to grow. Your honest reviews and feedback are the most valuable tools I can ask for. Please let me know what you loved, what moved you, and where the story could be stronger. Your critiques will directly help me shape my next book as I continue to learn, improve my independent English writing skills, and rely more on my own growing voice.

Thank you for taking a chance on a new international author and helping me become a better storyteller
  • Indonesia
  • JoinedOctober 1, 2026


Story by aldi_atma
VESSEL by aldi_atma
VESSEL
Eighty percent of the world vanished in a single heartbeat. What's left behind isn't human anymore. Lukas was...
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