cupid_cutie12

First kudos writer Amazing writing  You Are
          A small request hope u read consider it *going to be a long one*
          Can u write a OS on the episode where meerab finds murtasim and haya in gaon haveli in that in my opinion I find it hard accept the fact that meerab let go of murtasim easily because it went a little overboard coz HAYA HAD HER HANDS AND TRACING IT OVER MURTASIM AND IT DID NOT BOTHER HIM.
          He could have jerked her (maybe he was concerned) but yet that wasn't acceptable right although it wasn't 1st time.
           In the process making meerab jealous he gave the freedom to haya to invade his space and she got that he wouldn't say her anything if he considered her as his behen type and even after knowing he obsession Over him. In episodes like 
          1. Episode 21 in 30:50 haya kept her hands on murtasim shoulder 
          2. Episode 22 joshanda he appreciated haya's effort
          3. Episode 23 the gajra he could have told  in front of haya that it was for meerab (though he gave room full of gajras)
          4. Episode 25 the goan haveli
          5. Episode 29 murtasim asked meerab to jump off the balcony if meerab being in touch with rohail makes murtasim mad then haya with murtasim????? 
          
          I wish I really wish u write like from  episode 29 after balcony meerab pointing haya's advances towards murtasim stating mainly about HAVELI SCENE also about her situation of geeting married her dreams of becoming lawyer and meerab ignoring murtasim making murtasim realize his mistakes take steps against haya asking sorry to meerab in a cute way proposing her fulfilling her dream of lawyer then meesam and a Happily ever after
          Our murtasim has green flags but in the matter of haya I find it difficult to leave murtasim when he is aware of her intentions. 
          I maybe overthinking about this but really feel someone can write about it u know.
          Hope u read this and consider it. 
          And also bless u and ur family. Continue ur Good Work.
          
          

cupid_cutie12

@snugglesxhugs  Those were amazing    read so many times  thanks for taking my suggestions  means a lot  
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aestheticsmuse

@cupid_cutie12 thank you it means a lot that you appreciated my writing ❤️
            
            I guess about gaon haveli I have written in my OS which is yours truly part and balcony ones it's trust in the same OS...
            
            While other parts I will take those suggestions and hopefully can deliver upto the mark ... thank you for the suggestions too 
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aestheticsmuse

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Hello!! Thank you for your support on my work 'Entangled knot’ . It means a lot to me. I hope you had fun reading it.❤️❤️