@Primestar101 Np, liked the description it seems like a good fanfic 

Well  I am just gonna upload it’a next chapter in this week or next.

@fabulouslywritten I didn't finish reading yet, but it's very compared to some of other fiction I have seen but I guess if you could change the spacing a bit it would improve it. U don't really feel comfortable rating it because I have no qualifications but so far it's been a 7 - 8

Oh yeah a rating would also help