Hi! I'm an aspiring Italian writer.

Oddly enough, I've chosen to write my first novel in English.

Why? Because this story has lived in my head for a long time, and I wanted to challenge myself by sharing it with a wider audience.

Since English isn't my native language, I'd love to hear your thoughts-not only on the story itself, but also on how it reads. Does it flow naturally? Are there any awkward sentences, confusing passages, or moments that pull you out of the story?

Whether it's about the plot, the characters, the pacing, or the writing, every piece of feedback is genuinely appreciated.

Thanks for giving my story a chance, and I hope you enjoy the journey.