JulianoBones
Hello, thank you for reading my fanfic, El que Volvió, I really like the comments and analysis of the chapters, I wanted to know if you could comment something about our other chapters, if I need to make any corrections to the story.
For example, I'd like to know what you thought of the TW story, does it make sense to you? Does he seem like an interesting character?
At the end of chapter 38 where he mentions the names of several fanfics by other authors, was it a good choice to do that?
Don't feel obligated to do this, I just wanted to say how much this support encourages me to continue.
Thank you for reading.
YesseniaMendoza836
@JulianoBones You're welcome I hope you continue the story and stories to continue more for they are good and may have a unique taste it that I quite enjoy.
JulianoBones
@ YesseniaMendoza836
Hi, thanks for the feedback, I really put a lot of references, I was influenced by a Nazarick Granprix fanfic which is really fun, but I justify this as something that TW himself would do, as they are clues, only someone from Earth would recognize those names, moreover like him was a fan of old pop culture, some friend could recognize these same clues, that's what led Ainz to know who the "Traveler" was.
There are also some Easter Eggs scattered around. such as the number 27 and 42 being repeated several times, in the tunnels that collapsed in the dwarf kingdom, the intersection T-27 W-42, Inta's age 2742 years, even the location of the great Tomb, when Ainz altered CZ's memory. If you use Google Earth, the address she gave will find me.
I really appreciate you reading and enjoying it, I have several arcs ready so enjoy.
Thanks