YanieSicard

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YanieSicard

Check out my story please i need to know if it’s good or not

YanieSicard

@mj_beckett did i? I never meant to. I really want to only write in liv’s pov otherwise you’d learn the plot twist too fast!!! Also thank you for the comment :)
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mj_beckett

I think your summary is very intriguing, and the story is actually pretty well-written so far. Just make sure you aren’t switching between 1st and 3rd POV cuz that confused me a bit
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