I finished opposite attracted awhile ago but still tear up think my about this book. This is definitely my most saddest and favorite book I’ve ever read and wish I could real love the night I started it.
OMGGGGG I AM IN LOVE WITH YOUR LATEST OUTSIDERS STORY WITH JOHNNY IT IS THE BEST ONE I HAVE READ AND I CAN NOT WAIT FOR MKRE CHAPTERS ITS SO GOOD PLA KEEP WRITING WHENEVER YOU CAN OMGGGG ITS SO GOOD ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I checked out your story, and I like how you switch from Eclipse to Ash in POV's. One problem with this however is that near your early chapters like the meeting the characters and chapters one and two, you repeated what the other saw. If you are using POVS you want to try and make them different from one another, and if they are going to be witnessing the same things then make them see and feel things in a different way rather than repeating what Ash or Eclipse saw last. You also forgot a POV on chapter two. Other than that there are a few spelling and grammar errors, but I have those too because I don't edit my stories. I think your story is going to be really interesting, keep writing!