Hi. I love the story " Renessmee's Twin". Its very good but the grammar and the spelling can use some work. I had a little trouble reading because some words didn't use the correct grammer. I suggest writing your story on Google docs, and then copy and pasting on wattpad, as it will automatically fix the grammer. Overall, it's very good. I'm looking forward to the character development of Carlie and more chapters. And just asking, how long is this story?