Vbstar1365

Ok please tell me someone can help.
          	I can’t find this story I read and I loved it. Idk if the author took it down or I just can’t find it.
          	It was a phantom of the opera story set in modern day where the main character and her brother (maybe twin?) I can’t remember, but they’re actors and I think their uncle is Ramin Karimloo. they speak French and they go to France. The more I think about it I think the brother was an actor and the sister was a stage manager or something, and she’s backstage and keeps finding clues of the phantom then she find him and I believe a back and forth and relationship ensues.
          	This is all I can remember but I loved this story from a few years ago and I wish I could find it again. 
          	Please let me know if you can help!

Vbstar1365

Ok please tell me someone can help.
          I can’t find this story I read and I loved it. Idk if the author took it down or I just can’t find it.
          It was a phantom of the opera story set in modern day where the main character and her brother (maybe twin?) I can’t remember, but they’re actors and I think their uncle is Ramin Karimloo. they speak French and they go to France. The more I think about it I think the brother was an actor and the sister was a stage manager or something, and she’s backstage and keeps finding clues of the phantom then she find him and I believe a back and forth and relationship ensues.
          This is all I can remember but I loved this story from a few years ago and I wish I could find it again. 
          Please let me know if you can help!

KeliaSchooley

omg!! i just read your Hellboy and i can’t believe there are only 10 parts!!!!  I so was not ready to have it end on that. i hope you write more!!

Vbstar1365

I’ve been thinking of doing a rewrite but who knows! I really love the second hellboy movie so I’d love to move into that one. Not sure how I feel about the supernatural storyline tie in. Let me know your thoughts and I’ll consider writing it again!
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Eliathe92

Hi there! I have been reading your fic on tumblr (Hello Detective) and I just saw you have a profile on wattpad too! I'm in love with the fic by the way. P.D.: Sorry for my english, I'm from Spain and sometimes it gets hard to write in another language

Vbstar1365

Thank you! Your English is great! You should be proud of the fact that you can speak another language, in the US most people only speak 1. On Tumblr I post in imagine form and here it's in 1st person. Feel free to message me anytime on here to tumblr (I'll probably answer tumblr quicker though:))
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Rin-Rhino

k so I read it and it's great. I like the way you intermingled adilaide but you POV kinda gets confusing when you say your when you mean me. and when you have quotations in a conversation. grammatically there is always supposed to be something in between two of them. like "words" he said "stuff" she replied. not "words" "stuff" it gets confusing on who's saying what then. it's a really great book though, so keep up the good work!

Vbstar1365

@Rin-Rhino thanks! This means a lot!
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