It is totally fine! One of the suggestions I would give you (if you don’t mind of course ) is adding little spaces between characters speaking! Like this-
“Hi there!” ??? Said
“Hi! How are you?” Replied ?? back.
Another thing would be just trying to be more descriptive with you sentences! Other than that really really good! Thank you for reaching out! It means a lot
20 followers already!? Thank you guys so much! I'll be writing a little bit of Sokeefe one-shots as a reward as soon as I can! Also, who's excited for the Keeper movie!? Ik I am :))
Thanks so much for all of the support! If you haven't already, I'd love it if you could check out my account where I keep all of my originals! It's @_surreality :) ❤️