Hey, I've come here after reading the whole story just now and I think your story was amazing and best I've read in a while which left me smiling and grinning to myself most of the time.
After reading this first chapter of yours I wondered what could possibly be so inappropriate with the story but as closeted person myself I guess everyone thinks those thoughts when they are at that point, so it's the least to be said not inappropriate but the reality of how things are.
I'm glad you didn't rush the story as love at first sight or anything but actually developed the characters interactions to make them closer and eventually like each other. Despite most of the stories which purely base the gay relationships as mostly lustful and sexual this story was a great change and I loved every part of it. Despite some things being wrong or confusing in the story it was pretty good and I appreciate and support you on your future works.
Thank you