SumitraJain371

Give me feed back 
          	I just published "give me feed back" of my story "abhirohi in heart (Slow Update)". https://www.wattpad.com/1426260050?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=SumitraJain371

SumitraJain371

SumitraJain371

SumitraJain371

Hii gyus
          I know bhut hurt hoa hoga agr aap indian h to aaj hm wc (world cup)nhi jit payeh mgr koi nhi better luck next time ....
          
          Or yeh kehker mein abhi tk jaag rhi hoon
          
          Yes .....,.
          Indian hoon rcb fan hoon cricket hee sb kuch h to dil toot gya nd I think a sb
           ka yhi  haal hoga .... but koi na ...
          
          But dukh jyada. Iska h ki itni mehant kerne ke baad bhi .....
          
          
          Or kuch insta per Twitter what's aap ya frnd family ko lagta h ki (Mahi ) hota to baat kuch or thi ... yes I am totally agree but rohit or virat nd shubham or bhi khiladhi ne mehant hee nhi ki yeh sochna ya kehne  yeh to glt h ....
          
          
          Bhut hurt hora h yrr 
          
          
          Lagtar 10 match jitna but final mein haar jana 
          
          Mujhe is baat se ki hm wc (world cup)  nhi jit paaye is baat se jyada yeh drd derha h ki virat the king nd rohit best caption ka last match tha .... 
          
          Ahhhh 
           Mene bhut interview dekhe jaha rohit sir kehte h ki jo trophy vonke liyeh kitni jyada important thi yrrr
          
          
          But koi naaa.....
          
          Or yeh kehker mein ab tk ro rhi hoon 
          
          India deserve kerti thi trophy 
          
          But koi phir world cup aayega or tb hm jitenge 
          
          Yeh positivity  rkhna
          
          
          
          Mein bs apni felling share kerna chti thi 
          
          Agr kisi ko bura laga ho to sry