Shoko--Instano

I don’t know if you’re still doing OC reviews, but can you review my Naruto OC Nariko Hayashi? It’s the first chapter of my book The Book of Nariko Hayashi. Be totally honest- please.

Hi I'm new here and when I read you're work fanfic I love it and if you have time please update your koruko no basket x reader I really love that work 

|Personality|
          At first look, Takara is shallow, self-centered and disconnected of reality. Once one meet her better, she's loyal, optimist and determined. Takara is always ready to drop anything in order to help her friends, and to throw hands with anyone who is an ass to them. Takara is idealistic, and focused on her objective of being a political hero. 
          She is insistent on approaching people who catches her attention, and can be pushy and nosy about it. Per example, Aoyama's facade of being shallow and vain (much like people judge her to be) caught her attention and as she relized there was more to him than what he showed, she became determined to befriend him.
          Takara is also very kind to people in necessity, wanting to console and help victmins and civilians. She is a firm believer of second chances, an conviction that makes her try to approach her Mother, even if this always ends with her heartbroken.
          She dreams of meeting her Father and wonders frequently if she has siblings.

|Backstory|
          Takara was the result of a drunk one night stand from her mother on the college. The condom broke and her mom got pregnant, and didn't remember who the father was. Having never wanted kids, her mother resented Takara, until her quirk manifested, after which she started exploring Takara for money, pushing her to quirk exhaustion often.
          When she was 9, her distant Aunt Honoka, discovered what was happening and told Takara's grandfather, who treatened to put her mother in jail if she did not pass the guardianship of the girl to him. She then went to live with him, who put her on theraphy and incentived her to discover herself as much as she wanted to. 
          Originally, Takara wanted to be a Social Worker, but after meeting another person with a history like her, she realized that there was no hero advocating to Quirk exploration victims and became determined to help exploited victims and bring cases like hers to spotlight. Rather than going to U.A., she went to a school that had a similar excellence but less competition - Kyuseishuu Academy. 
          She, along with four others classmates were interns under their homeroom teacher, but where incentived by them to branch out. She went with the Diamond Hero: Bling! where she meet'd Aoyama, who was also interning under the diamond hero.
          
          |Trivia|
          Takara is allergic to Peanuts
          She collects stuffed toys
          Takara can't cook to save her life
          Her favorite thing is making stone weapons
          She loves swimming
          Takara gifts hand-made bracelts to all her friends. All of them have at least one scale from her snake.
          She can't she anything without her glasses, and has to keep them on her hero Costume
          Takara is afraid of thunder.

|Hero/Villain Details|
          Hero/Villain Name: Miner
          Costume: Takara's hero costume consists on a black sleeveless flowy tunic that ends mid-thight, grey legging-like pants (both of a kevlar-like material) and high ankle black working boots with steel tips. Her arms are covered from mid forearms down to her wrist with bracelets, a variety of metal and chain belts dangling from her hips; a dozen of necklaces and at least one ring on each finger on both hands. Finally, she puts gemstone beads and metalic wires on her dreadlocks, three earrings/piercings on each ear and golden framed glasses.
          Motivations: Iwai's motivation is to help kids who, like her, where exploited for their quirks.
          Quirk: Magnetic. This quirk allows Takara to detect, pull up, control and/or re-shape any precious stone, mineral or metal around and under her.
          Abilities: Due to being able to re-shape anything her quirk allows her to call up, Takara's abilities can vary from weaponizing her costumes acessories (Turning her chain belts on whips, per example), to creating a distraction by having a precious stone pop from behind/under someone, to even causing a short circuit on electronics by manipulating or removing cooper wiring from them.
          Moves: To Be Added (Still Thinking)
          Weaknesses: Takara don't known what she's pulling up, only the aproximated size of it - this means she can end pulling things like Uranium (which is radioactive but considered precious). After 3 meters (9 feet) of distance, she feels physical strain, like she excavated it out with her bare hands. Anything heavier than 5 kilograms (11 lbs) makes her nose and ears bleed with the pressure, as do trying to control too many things at once. She gets overwhelmed if there is too many controllable things around her.
          Other Abilities: Takara fights Krav Maga and uses an opal blade knife.
          Internships: Canvas (Internship)
          - Bling! (Work-Studies)
          
          |Statistics|
          Power: 4/5 
          Speed: 2/5
          Technique: 3/5
          Intelligence: 3/5
          Cooperativeness: 5/5

Name: Takara Iwai
          Nicknames/Aliases: - Taki (By Maiara)
          - Jewel (By her Grandfather)
          - The Girl (By her Mother)
          Gender: Female
          Age: 14-15
          Birthday: June,24
          Sexuality: Bisexual
          Height: 179 cm (5'10")
          Weight: 58 kg (127 lb)
          Hair Color: Cinnamon Brown
          Eye Color: Clear Green (Seems to change colors according to the light)
          Skin Color: Cocoa Brown
          Looks: Takara is tall and skinny, with long hair pulled in dreadlocks. She uses large round glasses, has a considerably large nose, plump lips, freckles that are shaped like diamonds, her eyebrows are thin, has high cheeckbones and dark skin. Her nails are kept short.
          Casual Clothes: Her casual clothes, consist on a yellow cropped, black jeans shorts, beige flipflops, a rainbow stone necklace, black framed round glasses and a red bandana on her hair.
          Occupation: Student (Class 100 - Kyuseishuu Academy - Hero Course)
          
          |Relationships|
          Parent(s): Keiko Iwai (Mother)
          - Unknown Father
          Sibling(s): Unknown
          Relative(s): Akimitsu Iwai (Grandfather)
          - Honoka Iwai (Aunt)
          Friend(s): ~OCS~
          - Maiara Freitas
          - Choko Tadashi
          - The Ikeda Triplets (Atsushie; Yoshie and Sachie)
          - Shun Ishikawa
          - The rest of her Class
          ~ CANON ~
          - Yosetsu Awase
          - Toru Hagakure
          - Kinoko Komori
          - Mei Hatsume
          Romantic Interest(s): Yuga Aoyama
          Other(s): Koharu Sasaki/Canvas (Homeroom Teacher)
          - Master Driller (Hero Idol)
          - Miu Busujima/Bling! (Internship Mentor)
          Pet(s): Ruby (Red Corn Snake)

Hello

Youre not realy active lately, u good? Also still waiting for the mha oc review for updates

Are you ok

Is the mha oc review still open?