Hi! I am here for people who want to swap one for one on reviews/critiques.  Right now I'm working on turning Cold-Blooded, a DC Universe fanfic, into Snowblood, a paranormal novel which could potentially be published in the real world.  So I really could use input on it.

I will base the quality of my reviews on the quality of yours. If you leave a comment like 'I luv this update soon.', you'll get something like that back. If you leave a good quality review, you'll get a good quality review.

What makes a review good quality?

A good quality review:

-Proves that you read the chapter you are reviewing.

-Is polite and friendly.

-Mentions at least one thing in the chapter that you liked, enjoyed or appreciated, and why.

If you see something that you think could be improved, mention it. You don't have to suggest a way to fix the problem, but if you do, I would appreciate hearing your idea even if I don't end up using it.

If the chapter evoked an emotion in you, mention that. Even if it's not the emotional reaction I was aiming for, it is helpful to know how the writing affected you. I will give as good as I get.

Okay, now the nitty-gritty.


If you can't take fanfic in any form, don't PM me.


If I am not familiar with what you're ficcing, I will judge it the same as any original work, so don't assume I know anything about the characters or world you're writing about. If I think I can review it fairly and intelligently, I'll give it a shot.


My fic is long and is only going to get longer. I would love to swap for reviews on every single chapter.

I reserve the right to refuse or to cancel for any reason. I am a fast reader and I will try to get back to you in 24 hours or less, but Real Life sometimes intervenes.
  • JoinedSeptember 3, 2014

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Scribblescribble Scribblescribble Sep 25, 2015 04:24AM
Major, major rewrite of chapter 3 of Snowblood.  Check it out!
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