anotherwriter989

Pehea mai nei, hoaloha, how come there’s no more chapters? 
          
          Kidding, but did you lose your edits too? Man, I want ao3 to come back for five minutes only so I can copy my edits.

anotherwriter989

@JanLinden ah okay, just wondering. Cool!
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JanLinden

@anotherwriter989 No changes in the plot, but I added a couple of significant changes in description to chapter 11.
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anotherwriter989

@JanLinden hey, that’s cool! I’m glad you got to go back and clean up your story a bit, it’s always fun to go back because you can see where you’ve improved in your writing. I should keep fixing up my chapters too. Are you going to change up any plot points at all?
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JanLinden

Oh, and I see that you've been reading the new version of chapter 11 I uploaded to Wattpad this afternoon. Did you notice any changes from the previous version?

RandomReader8246

@JanLinden Oh wait! I've been reading the new version of chapter 5 actually. Still haven't seen chapter 11... So, there's somthing new, huh?)))
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RandomReader8246

@JanLinden I had only a brief look for now, to check... But now that you've said that)))
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JanLinden

I notice you just added the Emma & Bella story I found to your reading list. I haven't begun it yet - I've just finished chapter 3 of "Love at low tide" by Vividreams, which is a story that AoiUmi_97 is commenting on. The story is really well-written, and seems to have similar rules to H2O, even though it's not an H2O story.

RandomReader8246

@JanLinden Really? Hmm, I'll make sure to check it out as well
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