RachelLee4

Finally I found the space of time to write my next novel after three years of being busy. My upcoming novel is The Unquenchable Red String Of Fate.

RachelLee4

Hi fans, I have just penned a tribute novella to all the beautiful 26 angels who have perished in the merciless massacre at Connecticut. All I asked from all of you is for a prayer for them and their families during this arduous time. I hope that all of you can put aside your differences, regardless of nationalities, race, religion, gender and age , your prayers are all so vital right now. Thank you. 

RachelLee4

@Tracyp thanks for reading my story and giving me your valuable feedback , I will make an effort to vet through my work before publishing it to make sure that there are no spelling or grammatical errors. Ok will try to slow down the pace and focus more on the love bet Dylan and Ciara and to heed your advice to provide more descriptions. Thank you ;)

Tracyp

Hey, have read your story, I like the plot. It's quite fast paced but I like that the only thing I would suggest is to watch your grammar and spelling, especially when they talk. Also you could try adding more descriptions to bulk out your chapters. Hope this is OK, looking forward to reading more:-) 

RachelLee4

Hi black cherry glass, thanks for your comment. This is my first book on Wattpad. Feel free to give me suggestions as I have ample room for improvement. Christian vampires? That is really interesting perhaps you can add a little spice to it by mentioning that they r diff from the rest of the vampire race. They will not get burn by holy water, not afraid of the cross , drinks animal blood instead of humans n can help the humans slaughter any evil vampires by pouring holy water on them.

BlackCherryGlass

Hi, Rachel.  I am married too.  I have two teenage kids.  Older one is Savannah and the younger one, Sawyer.
          Anyway.  I am scouting around for ideas for a sequel to 
          CHRISTIAN  VAMPIRES!  Thought I would check your stories out since you're in the vampire genre section!!!!
          Peace, BCG