(@ROO__1)'s conversations

ROO__1

Apr 11, 2024 05:13PM

I apologize to everyone who was expecting the release of the next chapter. Lately, I've been grappling with doubts about the direction of this story, especially since it's the first one I've crafted solely from my imagination. I often find myself wondering if the chapters are too long, too complicated, or simply not up to par. These inner thoughts have been frustrating, leading me to repeatedly rewrite chapters I've already completed.
          	
          	Now, I'm committed to establishing a clear path forward for the story. If anyone has tips on improving my consistency, creativity, or overall quality, I welcome your feedback. Constructive criticism is also appreciated as it helps me identify areas for growth.
          	
          	Once again, I'm sorry for any disappointment caused to those eagerly anticipating the next chapter.
          	
          	Changes to Prologue:
          	- Complete removal of original Prologue, replaced by Chapter 1
          	- Slight decrease in words
          	- Machine Origin will remain unkown
          	- Extended, more dramatic and chaotic dream
          	- Introduction of new characters and new nations 
          	- The machine's atmospheric entrance remains anonymous with only AI description

Gohan_Grey

@ROO__1 we all will look forward to it, and I agree with @Osean_Federation, super agree

Apr 14 • Reply

ROO__1

I'm thrilled to see that you all are genuinely enjoying the story. I have a lot of exciting chapters planned for the future, and I can't wait to publish them once I write them. Things are going to get really wild and exciting.

Apr 12 • Reply

Osean_Federation

@ROO__1  Nevertheless you continue your story which is pretty rare to find one dude, Sci Fi vs High Fantasy is one of my favorite. Can't wait too see more chapter.

Apr 12 • Reply

ROO__1

Apr 11

I apologize to everyone who was expecting the release of the next chapter. Lately, I've been grappling with doubts about the direction of this story, especially since it's the first one I've crafted solely from my imagination. I often find myself wondering if the chapters are too long, too complicated, or simply not up to par. These inner thoughts have been frustrating, leading me to repeatedly rewrite chapters I've already completed.
          
          Now, I'm committed to establishing a clear path forward for the story. If anyone has tips on improving my consistency, creativity, or overall quality, I welcome your feedback. Constructive criticism is also appreciated as it helps me identify areas for growth.
          
          Once again, I'm sorry for any disappointment caused to those eagerly anticipating the next chapter.
          
          Changes to Prologue:
          - Complete removal of original Prologue, replaced by Chapter 1
          - Slight decrease in words
          - Machine Origin will remain unkown
          - Extended, more dramatic and chaotic dream
          - Introduction of new characters and new nations 
          - The machine's atmospheric entrance remains anonymous with only AI description

Gohan_Grey

@ROO__1 we all will look forward to it, and I agree with @Osean_Federation, super agree

Apr 14 • Reply

ROO__1

I'm thrilled to see that you all are genuinely enjoying the story. I have a lot of exciting chapters planned for the future, and I can't wait to publish them once I write them. Things are going to get really wild and exciting.

Apr 12 • Reply

Osean_Federation

@ROO__1  Nevertheless you continue your story which is pretty rare to find one dude, Sci Fi vs High Fantasy is one of my favorite. Can't wait too see more chapter.

Apr 12 • Reply

ROO__1

Dec 23, 2023

Changes to Note:
          
          Prologue:
          - 12,500 words have been lessened to 7,500 words
          - A completely new backstory of the Machine
          - A new name for the Machine Species
          - Humanity involvement and mentions have been deleted and left unkown
          - New enemies for the Machines 
          
          Chapter 1: 
          - Added pictures for Characters : Elara and Aeliana
          - Cargo Ship has been changed to Shuttle
          
          Chapter 2: 
          - The Elf Ambush is more intense
          - The escort now has 500 Knights
          - Tamed monsters particpated in the battle
          - The Knight Captain is more powerful and sustains much more worse injuries
          - Added pictures for Characters: Lyria and Elsyia
          - Change from their race to a chase competition to kill 10 Knights
          
          Chapter 3: 
          - Earth is not mentioned, except replaced with the name "Central node"
          - Humans have been discovered for the first time 
          - Added Description of the badly injured Knight Captain when found

svenzky

@ROO__1  Good day ! Looking forward for the next chapter !

Mar 05 • Reply

svenzky

@ROO__1  You're welcome If you're interested in the game (Starsector) This is the Video game review about this game by Sseth. Its kinda like mount and blade Warband  but in dystopian space. 
            
            This is the lInk:
            https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=acqpulP1hLo
            
            This is the Website the developers who created this fantastic game (and its been development for 12 yrs since 2011 ):
            https://fractalsoftworks.com/
            
            That is all and thank you! Im one of your few followers.
            Im sorry if i don't reply immediately.

Mar 03 • Reply

ROO__1

@svenzky Hello! It's totally surprising that I found myself a fan. Never thought I'd get this far. To answer your questions, I do not play Starsector, nor did I ever hear of such a game. Though it did pique my interest. I'm glad you hope that I can publish some sort of manga or anime. However, I can't draw, and I do not plan on paying anyone in doing so. I only wrote this story as a hobby, which can also contribute to why it takes so long to publish a chapter. I see why people hate or get annoyed about how slow this story is, but simply put, I only write if I have free time and in the mood to do so. I also actually finish writing a chapter, and the two extra weeks are just rewriting improvements and a general base of quality. I like this story to be the best of quality, and that would unfortunately bring my habit of rewrites. Though I would like to point out that, in the near future, I have no plans to discontinue. Thank you for understanding, and thank you for reading.

Feb 28 • Reply