PhantomHoodChan
Thank you so much
InikaBoy
Thanks for your feedback! And you’re right I kinda do need to proof read and probably read a bunch of books (Rick Riordan for days though). Again I appreciate the feedback and try and follow some of the tips you’ve given me.
-B
InikaBoy
Hey, it’s me and I’d like to tell you something. I’ve written some books and I need help with em, even if it’s from a bunch of random authors doing it, but then again what’s not the fun in that?
I don’t know what you’re timeline is or which country you live in. But honestly it doesn’t matter.
I also believe that I need help with my stories and any form of criticism to help make me a better author.
Yours truly
-B
PhantomHoodChan
Btw read Ahsoka’s child and Blackwater and I think they’re both great ideas and well written. The only critiques I can give is just to keep practicing and maybe reading some old fashioned literature (or modern if you prefer but old is richer in vocabulary) and learn how they structure their wording and descriptions. I’ve found that works of Robert Louis Stevenson and Oscar Wilde have really helped me personally as it allowed me to better my vocabulary so my work isn’t repetitive. I’m by no means a pro at writing but I can say that doing some light reading can really help one make better use of words. Secondly, proof read your work, (not implying that u don’t because I forget to sometimes just to get chapters out) but it’s really important as it gives you a sense of how the chapter flows, any spelling or grammar mistakes that can be easily fixed and if you’re not sure about anything there’s no harm in googling it. I tend to do it a lot myself.
Lastly (this is more of a tip than critique) if you have a writer’s block or aren’t motivated NEVER force it otherwise it won’t turn out as well as you would’ve liked it. No inspiration leads to bad work you can ask any artist whether it’s a writer or painter.
Sorry this is kinda long I tend to make sure my point gets across (god knows I do this too much in my essays) and I have read it yesterday but it was very late so I decided to reply to you today. I hope that’s ok and I hope this helps. If you’re ever confused or need more help feel free to message.
-AM
PhantomHoodChan
I can’t wait for season 7 this year!! So hyped!! But its going to be on their streaming site which we’ll have to pay for which sucks. Also a series called The Mandalorian is coming out on there and leaked pics look so good!!
InikaBoy
Mine to. Thow when I found out about Star Wars Legends and that all of the hard work that those writers had put in kinda made my heart sink. Damnit Disney! You make me sad