OscarMensink

@Eoghain thanks, only every now and then!

Gerry8

Hi Oscar,
          As promised, my comments on what you wrote. 
          My first thought was to correct your English, but as I was reading through them all I realised that it will take away the meaning and the feelings of that moment when you wrote them. 
          My advice is: don't correct them and don't stop writing either. By practice one can only get better. These thoughts are also an insight of you. The amazing part is that I "saw" parts of myself as well. Carry on, don't stop. This is not only a way to say thing that's hard to share, but also a way of venting when no-one will listen/understand. 
          Thank you for allowing me to read them. 
          I cannot wait to see more. 
          Take care....