OnyxOndine

Hey so I'm wiring a new story!!!!!
          	It's called "As We Know It" and it's about the realtor ship between Angela Weathers, the best damn lawyer in Washington state, (in her own words) who recently climbed out of a nuclear war bunker that she was pushed into seconds before everyone she'd ever known and ever could know died from nuclear fallout, 
          	Khalida, a who-knows-how-old vampire queen who's doing everything in her power to not do the job she'd never wanted in the first place when she comes across a scent so lovely she figures no one could fault her if she runs a bit late for the meeting to chase after it, only to meet someone she knows at first sight will be the face she wakes up to for the rest of her life, 
          	and Patience, a werewolf who is not impressed with Khalida or her unprofessionalism and is sent to retrieve her (pun intended) only to find herself enchanted by her and the beautiful human woman in her arms.
          	It's a first draft!!! And I'm writing as we go this time, but you can expect an update every week!!!!!! 
          	Pls vote and comment!!!!!!!! Thank u!!!

OnyxOndine

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OnyxOndine

Hey so I'm wiring a new story!!!!!
          It's called "As We Know It" and it's about the realtor ship between Angela Weathers, the best damn lawyer in Washington state, (in her own words) who recently climbed out of a nuclear war bunker that she was pushed into seconds before everyone she'd ever known and ever could know died from nuclear fallout, 
          Khalida, a who-knows-how-old vampire queen who's doing everything in her power to not do the job she'd never wanted in the first place when she comes across a scent so lovely she figures no one could fault her if she runs a bit late for the meeting to chase after it, only to meet someone she knows at first sight will be the face she wakes up to for the rest of her life, 
          and Patience, a werewolf who is not impressed with Khalida or her unprofessionalism and is sent to retrieve her (pun intended) only to find herself enchanted by her and the beautiful human woman in her arms.
          It's a first draft!!! And I'm writing as we go this time, but you can expect an update every week!!!!!! 
          Pls vote and comment!!!!!!!! Thank u!!!

OnyxOndine

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OnyxOndine

Ok so I'm officially published now on almost every platform!!!!! So, unfortunately, tomorrow at 10am, I will be taking This Book Belongs To: Melody down, permanently. 
          I'm gonna give out like, 80 warnings that it's not the full book in the description!!!! But in the meantime..... come look at my website!!!! And buy the full, professionally edited version of it as an ebook for 5.99!!!!! (Price pending I might make it cheaper lol) but I just want to thank you all.
          Every single vote, every single read, every single add to your reading lists has done wonders for my confidence in my work, and to be honest? I'm not sure I would've been able to publish it without the feedback you've given me.
          And I am incredibly sorry for ignoring those of you whose read for reads I've ignored!!! I apparently have adhd and it makes it hard for me to complete tasks, but I still greatly appreciate what you've done. 
          
          So, thank you. 
          I'll see you all again soon :) 

OnyxOndine

Ok, I was gonna take it down today but like, 2 ppl added it their reading list and now I feel bad :( plus the book isn't technically available for purchase yet, so I'm gonna give it until I get my ISBN and then I'm taking this edition off forever!!!!!!!! But I will give you all a days notice at least!!! 

OnyxOndine

So,,,,
          
          I just posted the rest of my second draft!
          
          This Book Belongs To: Melody is now officially complete!!!!
          
          Yes I did it because I heard complete books get more reads, and yes it is a little rough around the edges lol.
          
          But,,, just,, aaaaaa
          
          I want to especially thank @HelloEveryone25 for giving me the dopamine I needed to keep posting here and just generally being the best!!!
          And I want to apologize to everyone I agreed to do a read for read with and didn't!! I'm sorry!!! Your books are all super cool but i honestly got to a point where reading started to be impossible for a while, let alone reading with a critical eye!!!
          
          But, I do want to say, I am planning on ,,,,,,,Eventually,,,,,,, taking the book down, because after my developmental edit, which I promise y'all are gonna wanna see, I want to self publish this thing real bad!!! 
          (I will 100% be letting you all the exact date and time I'll be taking it down the second I figure it out btw, pinkie promise!!!)
          
          I've put my heart and soul into this and you all have made it so so so so so so much worth it.
          
          Thank you for reading, and voting, and commenting, and adding to your lists and scrolling by it and going "that looks interesting", you're just!!!! Amazing!!!!!! 
          
          This isn't the last of Melody's story, nor is it mine, but I'm thrilled you all stayed around for this long.
          
          Ok, bye!! I love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 
          

OnyxOndine

Just posted chapter sixty-six!!!!!
          
          " After the tenth call Hel made me put down the phone, I asked her to unplug it for a while.
          
          She let me vent of course, but this time she actually began to give me her opinion.
          
          "I'm aware of your guilt. It is not necessary. You are not responsible for each and every life you encounter, only your own. 
          Rest. 
          Take care of yourself before them, or neither you nor them will live through the week."
          
          She was right, but that doesn't mean I wanted to hear it. "

OnyxOndine

Just published chapter sixty four!!!!!!! This one is a bit of a doozy bois.
          
          
          
          "
          Anyway, I’d managed to calm down. Just a bit.
          
          And I walked back out into the living room, to see Suda calmly smoking a cigarette, despite the explicit no smoking sign at the entryway.
          
          "Smoking does horrors for your lungs you know, most people won't tell you that but my mother was a nurse, she saw first hand. Always swore it was all that smoke poisoning the lungs - "
          
          " - Do you want my help or not?"
          
          "Right. Apologies. I'm just still a bit..."
          
          "I get it."
          
          I fumbled around until I ended up in a sitting position. 
          
          I just wasn't particularly sure how I could go about this.
          
          "So, you've been doing well for yourself it looks like. 
          Why Thailand? Is it the weather? I'd guess it's the weather. And the food, it smells lovely here so far."
          
          Suda stared at me flatly, unwilling to even attempt a conversation." 
          
          Hope y'all enjoy!!!!! Don't forget to vote and comment!!!!