-kotoha_chan-

Pls update on “You are my best friend”!! I love that story so much!!! (Probably read it over 10 times lol not lying ^o^) I’m dying to know what happens between Haru, Rina and Tomoya!! =^.^= *dies*
          Have a great day ahead !! *smiles*

makoto_yuki

PS I had to cut my ridiculous long message in half cos it won't let me send haha
          I wasn't aware of the character limit here 
          

makoto_yuki

@makoto_yuki oh wow I didn't expect you to reply this quick haha 
            It's ok, really
            And like I said on my message I sent, I apologize for being annoying 
            Thank you for taking your time reading my ridiculously long message haha
            I pray and hope that things get better on your side
            Glad I could put a smile on someone today
            Thank you again for the consideration
            God Bless you
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OchiDochi

@makoto_yuki omg, I am really sorry for the very long wait.
            Thank you for the suggestion. I just really dont have the time and inspi to continue, but I al4eady have a draft for the next chapter. I just dont feel that it's time to publish it. The part doesnt feel right, it lacks of something I cant point out. But considering your suggestion, I might include that in the story, I just dont know on what part I will include this. There's been a lot of going on rn. But I really appreciate your concern. Thank you and God bless.
            Your message made me smile ☺️
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makoto_yuki

Anyway, I think Haru's jealousy should be more noticeable or at least for Mami and Tomo to notice (cos I love their teasing/caring mix personality haha) Rina could also exhibit a bit of jealousy towards Haru's new friend which could be easily notice by Mami and Tomo too but oblivious for Haru to notice
          Then there could be a point in the story where either Rina or Haru (most likely Rina) to ask for a private conversation and question how they suddenly grew apart in such short time or question the times that one of them is getting hot-and-cold treatment (I think Rina could be fitting for this maybe cos she's a nice and sweet girl. Then as the tension builds up on their interrogation between each other, one of them slips out that the reason was because they like them (on this part I don't know who's fitting of slipping out) 
          So yea, here's the idea I thought of
          Hope to hear from you
          And advance thank you for reading my long message
          I just really love your story so much
          Anyway, Stay Safe and God Bless 

makoto_yuki

Hi, Good Morning. It's me again and I apologize if I did get annoying now ‍♂️
          I have reread your story "You're My Best Friend" while having to think of an idea that could somehow spark motivation and inspiration to you. Yes, I know I get annoying at this point but if you would consider my idea that I have come up, it would be highly appreciated. So right now, both Haru and Rina have meet their new friends, right? Also I think the part where they're not in the same class could be helpful
          So here's what I thought, how about making them jealous as they hang with their new friends and gradually shorten the time Haru and Rina spend with each other, shorter time than they already have. There could be a point where Haru sees Tomoya being sweet and nice to Rina, as for Rina who is nice and sweet will accept it, Haru grunts/grits her teeth from jealousy 
          As for Aina, she could get to the point where she sometimes get touchy to the point she'll lean on Haru or links her arms with Haru. Yes, Rina sees it all and feels jealous everytime she sees that.
          Also knowing Mami and Tomo, they would somehow fuel that jealousy within Haru and Rina  thru their usual teasings whenever they're together. If what I suggest makes sense in a way haha but it is your choice if you want to add the povs of Haru and Rina
          

makoto_yuki

Hi
          How are you? 
          I was wondering if you're still going to continue your story "You're My Bestfriend"
          I really like the story and I really was hype on knowing how Haruna will realised that she loves Rina and how things will turn out due to the topic that bothered Haruna about the Tomoya guy
          I hope you continue this
          Thank you and GodBless

makoto_yuki

@OchiDochi Good evening That's ok, I don't mind. I really like the story flow and it's different from the fanfics I read about scandal. Anyways, I hope you find the right foot to move forward GodBless you
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OchiDochi

@makoto_yuki hi. Thank you for reading my story. I really don't know how to pick the story up again. I already have a draft for the next chapter but it feels wrong to publish it right away. I've been having this debate inside me that it can be much better. I can't promise or tell a specific day on when I will continue the story. But thank you for messaging me. I'm just still finding the right foot to make a step forward for this story. Again, thank you and God Bless
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