Nyhterides

When his shirt is low enough to expose part of his back I see it – deep black, covering from shoulder to lower back –  wings. 
          	
          	“He is Gabriel, come down from the sky.”
          	
          	My sisters yelp. They run out of the house leaving me all alone with the angel who’s about to come out of his deep slumber.  
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/1444670420-the-rapunzels-onc-2024-12-fallen-angel
          	
          	Five chapters left until The Rapunzels is finished! Who do you think Fia's stranger is? Is he really an angel? 
          	
          	Thank you to everyone who's been reading despite my super slow posts during this kinda crazy time. <3

Nyhterides

When his shirt is low enough to expose part of his back I see it – deep black, covering from shoulder to lower back –  wings. 
          
          “He is Gabriel, come down from the sky.”
          
          My sisters yelp. They run out of the house leaving me all alone with the angel who’s about to come out of his deep slumber.  
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1444670420-the-rapunzels-onc-2024-12-fallen-angel
          
          Five chapters left until The Rapunzels is finished! Who do you think Fia's stranger is? Is he really an angel? 
          
          Thank you to everyone who's been reading despite my super slow posts during this kinda crazy time. <3

Nyhterides

If you like Cinderella retellings, here's a wonderful list of stories. https://cmrosens.com/2024/04/22/cinders-and-glass-book-edition/
           You'll find Angel there, too!! 
          If you're a fan of Cinderella, but darker, more twisted, and with an amazing male lead (and vampires!), you may want to check out my story: https://www.wattpad.com/story/258542249-angel

Glory_feeling2

@Nyhterides Hi! That's awesome! My novel Labyrinth is a retelling of the nursery rhyme of Jack and Jill. At that time, I thought why not? Cause if Classics can be retold, why not nursery rhymes? LOL! It is said though that Jack and Jill is the real story behind the fall of Prince Louis the 16th and Marie Antoinette's ruling and the pail of [poisoned] water is a symbol of the written treaty [misfortune]. At that time, I learned of the other rhymes too ... like Humpty Dumpty is really a cannon ball ... when it was shot ... that's the reason it couldn't be put back together again! Of course,  as kids, we don't need to know that. I also want to do one on the hunchback of Notre Dame. To me, that fairy tale didn't really end on a happy note. Sure for the girl, but not for the hunchback, guess because he's disfigured and during those times, the disabled weren't hardly regarded. Imagine what Pia can do ... LOL! I guess I'm more of the writer who wants to take on subjects that aren't often looked upon. And as the poet, George Bernard Shaw once said, " I dream of things and ask ... Why not?" LOL!
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Nyhterides

@Glory_feeling2 I enjoy retellings!! Did you know Rosalind is a retelling of Beauty and the Beast? I hope you get to write yours :)
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Glory_feeling2

@Nyhterides Hehehe... you read my mind my friend cause if I ever get back to my WIP on the retelling of classics ... I love to do a Cinderella story on what if it was the complete opposite. Yet in a different format. Cinder was a guy, he had step brothers who'd bully him. His mother married a man who despised him and it was a princess not a prince who fell in love with him. But like all my stories did they live happily ever after? I think NOT! LOL 
            
            I'll put Angel in my library.
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Nyhterides

Good luck to everyone who's submitted for the last round of the ONC!! The Rapunzels won't be submitted but I will finish the story.
          
          The ONC came at a difficult time for me this year. Though I'm sad I'm not entertaining the final round, I'm happy to have taken part!
          
          On another note, the DMs will be gone as of May 6 (which breaks my heart). I'm keeping in touch with a few people over Facebook, email, and WhatsApp. If anyone wants to keep in touch with me that way, send me a DM (while you still can...). How will you be keeping in touch with people in regard to private messages?

DreamingAboutCats

@Nyhterides yesss!! I'm waiting for you to finish it hehehe 
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Nyhterides

@DreamingAboutCats I need to finish it. It's a few thousand words from being done...and we need to know who the stranger is, right? I'll find you on Insta though I don't use it much.
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Nyhterides

@Glory_feeling2 I have Insta but rarely use it. I pretty much opened an account so I can follow my nieces.I used to use Twitter a lot but I stopped a few years ago. I will add you though! I saved a lot of my chats, too. I had a lot of things I wanted to save.
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Nyhterides

The Rapunzels made it past round two of the ONC!! I'm sad I won't be able to finish and enter it by the deadline but my life is in slight chaos lately.
          Congratulations to everyone who made it through, and to all of you still writing! ✨

Glory_feeling2

@Nyhterides Congratulations on making it on Round 2. Sometimes personal events happen in our lives that we can't prevent and forces us to put things down for a minute to take care of what is more important: ourselves and family. Be glad that you did The Rapunzels my friend. That's well accomplished. You can come back to it when you can! I'll also read it after all the other tasks I promised to do! Take Care!
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JayDEvers

@Nyhterides congrats, friend! Sometimes you have to experience the pain to find the joy in your life. Praying for you.
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Nablai

@Nyhterides Congratulations! ❤
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Nyhterides

This has been a weird week. Not just with the age of consent now becoming 18 on WP and we need to edit. It's a bunch of other stuff too. 
          
          A few nights ago I was in the ER (as a chaperone ) and didn't get home till 7 AM (things are ok...I think. I did see a bunch of interesting (and very drunk) people and I was making up stories for them in my head while we waited. Oh, I also got my first ambulance ride, and HOLY MOLY, do you all know how fast they drive???!!!. 
          
          Also, my aunt crashed her car just after leaving my place (thankfully everyone is ok). 
          
          Oh, Simone, Simone, Simone...send wine...

Glory_feeling2

@Nyhterides So that 'Simo ne' LOL. Thought it was a relative. *dmiles* I don't like autocorrect either as it does make errors, let alone that now we have to deal with AI.
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Nablai

@Nyhterides Sending you lots of tightest hugs, my friend ❤❤ Hope you get the peace you so profoundly deserve :) 
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Nacht_Owl

@Nyhterides Big hugs to you my friend. Hope life gives you a bit of a break so you can get some rest.
            (⁠っ⁠.⁠❛⁠ ⁠ᴗ⁠ ⁠❛⁠.⁠)⁠っ♥️♥️♥️
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Nyhterides

Made some minor changes in Rosalind to make sure everyone is at least eighteen since the story isn't exactly PG. I'm worried about the new rules regarding age, so now Troy is no longer 17, and Calla no longer got married at 16. 
          
          How many of you are editing because of the age rule?

Nyhterides

@Nacht_Owl Thankfully Troy and Calla's age was easy to fix, although I was a bit sad as I wanted Ros to be older than him, but I didn't bother changing. Now they are both 18. But in a piece written in the 1800s, people got married young, anyway, now Calla became a bride at 18. It's safe now! Anyhoo... Oh yah, some classic would have been in trouble!
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Nyhterides

@Glory_feeling2 I understand there need to be rules, and I agree boundaries should be set. But they had made the age of consent 16 (which is age of consent in many, many places all over the world). Suddenly, a lot of us need to panic edit works that have thousands of reads for fear of them being taken down. It's just worrying... I don't write anything graphic, but there are a few scenes that are a bit, er, not super innocent. I know of Lolita. She was 14, he was like...40. Ok, that's different! Romeo and Juliet were 13 and 14 if I recall correctly. If Shakespeare was on WP, that classic would have been banned.
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Nacht_Owl

@Nyhterides What a bloody nuisance for all the authors. No you have writers having to change their character ages and some are even removing books out of protest or fear that WP will do it for them.
            Such a bother for you all. 
            Horrifyingly the official age of consent in my country is 16. 
            This is a bit of a farce in a way as it is not realistic for the world we live in. And I do love the irony of some of the classic books not meeting WP guidelines *rolls eyes*
            Wishing you all luck with the editing.
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