About

Ok, so I suck at writing about myself.  So I'm gonna make this short but sweet! XD

I love J.K. Rowling, Maggie Steifvater, Jessica Verday, Kami Garcia & Margaret Stohl, Marian Keynes, Gemma Malley, Jodi Picoult, Phillip Pullman, Cassandra Clare, Stephen King, Charlaine Harris, Suzanne Collins & Richelle Mead.

As you can possibly tell I'm a big Paranormal/Fantasy girl and my books are much the same.

I am currently writing more than one series but my main priority is the one I started first which is The Black Craft - you'll see more updates of this than you will of any of my other series' (such as Rebel Rebel, Going Under and The Quixwood Sisters).

I was born 2nd August 1983, I have one sister (Julie) and a dalmatian (Polly.)
That's about all there is to know about me. The rest you'll figure out when you get to know me.

I'm farely easy going for the most part. XD
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The Hangman's Noose

Social data: 400 reads. 3 votes. 0 comments.

Description: cover by @Aphrodite270


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The Salem Mystique (sequel to The Black Craft)

The Salem Mystique (sequel to The Black Craft)

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MyCraft commented on That's the Alpha? - Chapter 1


MyCraft
so this book sounds really interesting so far but i see there are still some things for you to work on to make it a better read.
      i noticed you used the word 'expect' in scenarios when i think you meant to use the word 'except'
      
      once you change other spelling/grammar errors the whole book will come together much better and a smoother read.  on some instances i had to go back and re-read a sentence or a paragraph because these little errors would trip me up.
      
      as for the paragraph where you discuss which friends are mates i think you should lose the bracketed description and just change it to something simpler: I sat at my lunch table with my friends who were also all mates, Brooklyn and Michael,  Jane and Brad, Riley and Jay etc etc...
      
      the only other thing i think could improve it is if you added some more physical descriptions of the characters so we can get a clear image of them in our minds :) hope this helps :)


MyCraft
hey! so this story seems really interesting!
      i have a couple pointers you might want to take a look at.
      
      1.  watch your dialogue don't start a new line for each sentence eg
      "Mom said I couldn't do this"
      "So I went and did it anyway"
      "She was mad!"
      it makes it difficult to follow the conversation between the characters and understand which one is speaking with each new line.
      
      2. change these instances:
      "Now can you please give me my bra back please" Joe laughed and pouted
      "But like this view much more"
      this is what i would write instead:
      "Now can I have my bra back please?"
      Joe laughed and pouted, "But I like this view much more."
      if you get the conversation flowing right it makes reading the book much smoother
      
      3. babies don't grow in stomachs, they grow in wombs
      
      4. most midwives wouldn't recommend scans as early as six or seven weeks unless there were problems so i'd change the scan to closer to ten weeks to be more realistic
      
      
      hopefully you find this helpful and not at all nagging!!