MrDerp1
Question, how would y'all feel about more romance in Futuristic world? And how would you like to see it?
I've been suggested to add more romance into my story, so I want to hear what y'all think about it.
MrDerp1
JayBazerker
Hey Mr derp I had a few story ideas for you but since there's no more private messages on Wattpad I'd rather not reveal them on your post board, would you per chance have discord?
JayBazerker
I figured it would be the best way to do private messages so we could talk story ideas, I even am a part of a sorta dying Wattpad server from a long while ago when Wattpad started
JayBazerker
I have a couple suggestions/questions about futuristic world.
Suggestion: Im a little confused on some of the characters such as the protogens and how they work as living beings and size comparisons of most characters. Maybe a chapter can be made at the beginning of current described characters up to the latest chapters of total bios and different societal world characteristics.
Question: was Luna just a side character or will she be reintroduced later?
Question: from what I've read I've noticed how Y/n has changed as a character kinda but he doesn't have much in the arsenal of what he can do, would there be any training we would do or maybe be given a weapon of some kind?
Question: how many chapters do you see this story going for? Cause I personally see it going very far especially with side characters I've noticed been mentioned such as Typhon, maybe a gang member catches us at some point?
Anyway thank you for reading this and I have you have a great day
MrDerp1
@JayBazerker Thank you for asking! With Luna, she was actually originally going to return. She was going to be a plot twist and be shown to actually be a F.U.R spy kinda Character who has been following the main characters and telling Poly where they are. However, this idea was scrapped. For Y/N, he is supposed to represent you. Whatever happened in your life is what Y/N lived through in his before he was teleported here. However... As I was writing the story, I started to notice a few problems with how I wrote him as a character. So I'll admit... Y/N is a weak character. Which I will be attempting to fix moving forward. For the number of chapters, It'll probably have about maybe around 50 or so. I can make it longer, but I feel 50 is pretty good. There are a few things mentioned in earlier chapters like if I remember right a wanted shark man appears as a wanted criminal, but that can just be removed from the whole story since i made no plans to have something like that happen. Also I've already been preparing future stories too in the background. With the protogens and stuff, I've made a few attempts to explain how they work, but I've failed to actually do it because I've made them too complicated where it's hard to not just be straight forward about it with some dialogue or something. I'll definitely think about adding a chapter or something at the beginning to help with this. I actually had to take notes about how I thought of protogens and how they work because I couldn't keep up with my own ideas. The prequel story called Story of Dome will also help with this once I get around to writing it some more. I believe that is everything. If you have further questions feel free to ask me. I hope you have a good day!
MrDerp1
Chapter 46 is taking time. Mostly because life happened so I had to do some stuff. Also because I spent a good chuck of time simply just trying to think of what should happen next in the story and in what order it should happen.
I'm working on it though. Keep in mind that I've also been thinking about other future stories too, so I've been busy behind the scenes.
Here's a face to make you feel better. °o°
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hello
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Next chapter is almost ready. Imma just make a list of what story ideas people seemed to like most for the 102 followers thank you card before I delete that temporary chapter. I believe I counted the votes correctly, so here it is!
1: Put to waste - 0
2: The Curse of the Reaper - 3
3: Helluva boss/Hazbin hotel - 2
4: Mass Breach - 3
5: Lost treasures remake - 1
This is just a reminder for myself about what people liked most. There was also another story suggestion somebody gave me about a Golem character which I will heavily consider.
Thank you for voting for these different story ideas! I will look back at this list once I am ready to begin a new story! Keep in mind that a futuristic world sequel is still on the table as of right now. Which somebody else has also given me a idea for a possible sequel which we will talk more about once Futuristic world is complete.
Bye bye for now!
MrDerp1
Almost at 102 followers! 100 is good too, but 102 is even better, so we're gonna celebrate 102 followers instead of 100. It's funnier this way.
I feel like I should do something for y'all.. basically as a thank you, but I can't figure out what. My first idea was to tease a possible future story. But I don't have any future story ideas that are 100% guaranteed to happen.
However, I guess I could list off the current ideas for future stories that I have, and let y'all basically vote for which idea you like more. That way that idea gets turned into a story.
I'll worry about this once I actually reach 102 followers, but right now... Futuristic world is number 1 on my list. I'm just posting this just in case anyone has ideas for what to do on the 102 followers mark.
MrDerp1
Today was a pretty good day. Talked to some friends, relaxed while watching the rain, worked on my story, got my head slammed into the ground by a dog which caused my nose to bleed a little bit...
Pretty good day today. How about yours?
MrDerp1
Did anyone see the solar eclipse today?
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